It's Thursday, and I've gone from starting the week with a cushion to have the schedule strung out behind me. As I said at the start of the week,I'm taking a look at what can be changed.
In particular, I think I have to say that it's MOARMU that trips me up. It's frequently the last thing I write in a day, and if I try to hold myself to writing it earlier I end up not getting to the stuff after it.
When I first started it, my hope was that being less invested in the character than I am in Mackenzie would make it easier to write, but with how many times it's ground to a halt, I think the opposite is true. I just don't have the character down as well as I do her. It takes me longer to write a shorter story with him. Having a challenge, stretching myself as a writer, etc. is a good thing to do sometimes, but my satisfaction doesn't equal your enjoyment if it doesn't result in words on the page, does it?
If I get stuck on a character's viewpoint in Void Dogs or Star Harbor, I can flip around to somebody else and then come back (and when I remember that I can do that, it's much easier to do multiple updates a week). MOARMU doesn't work that way.
I haven't wanted to face this because my goal was to have the two stories following parallel tracks; MOARMU is coming up from behind as it is, so updating it less often than the parent series would just make it fall further and further behind.
So, I'm thinking I'm either going to have to change the schedule or the format or both. I haven't decided where to go with this. I don't want to abandon the characters and the plotlines I have in mind, but following the skirmish match it may go from the day to day story of Jamie's life at MU to an anthology of important episodes in his life at MU (more like a traditional novel) or maybe even a mosaic of interlocking serials from different peoples' point of view; after the skirmish match, change to another character, come back to Jamie for the dance, etc. It is, after all, "More Tales of MU", not "Jamie's Tales of MU".
I know there are people who prefer MOAR to the original recipe MU and this might disappoint them; on the other hand, for those who prefer it because it gives a wider view of the world, maybe making it a mosaic story would make it even better. In any event, there are still significantly fewer people reading MOAR than reading the original, and with more frequent updates, the audiences for Void Dogs and Star Harbor are creeping up towards MOAR's levels; cutting back on my commitment to telling Jamie's story will allow me to nurture those.
I don't know. I'm thinking about it. For now, I'm going to strike the remaining Mores off this week's schedule and finish everything else that's on it.
Edit-dendum:
Good feedback. I'm hearing a lot of people endorsing the mosaic idea and a lot of people saying they don't want to lose Jamie or see his plotlines left hanging. I guess I can clarify a little that giving him the axe (doesn't he already have that?) is not in the cards... what I'm looking at is ways to keep the story going forward when it keeps threatening to die on me. :P To the people who are saying that they would rather have more sporadic updates of Jamie's story than lose it... that's pretty much what the mosaic would be, except for the fact that during the times it's "sporadic", there would be something else to read.
I'm probably going to end up doing a combination of the things that have been mentioned. The mosaic focus would come around to Jamie when something interesting/important is going on from his side, and then move to somebody else when it isn't, so if you read Jamie's stories it would be a bit more novel-ish.
- Less More?
2009-02-19 06:08 pm (UTC)
I like more and starharbor
2009-02-19 06:19 pm (UTC)
write what you like, when you like. if more takes ten years to finish, I won't give a duck.
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2009-02-19 06:49 pm (UTC)
Sorry for the total wall of text; especially coming from a total unknown. I don't normally log in to LJ or post comments to the web comics/series which I read; but I still really enjoy reading your work!
Aaaawww craaaa
2009-02-19 06:50 pm (UTC)
Damn I was loving Jamie as a character so much.
2009-02-19 06:53 pm (UTC)
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2009-02-19 06:59 pm (UTC)
I think it is because I can relate to Jamie's point of view far better than Macks, but that is going to be different for everybody.
If you do change the format so it is written from multiple points of view I still think I would really enjoy that though.
Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged.
2009-02-19 07:03 pm (UTC)
2009-02-19 07:12 pm (UTC)
It would make me sad if MOARMU went away entirely, so my preference would be for you to find a way to keep doing it, at whatever pace and whatever way works for you.
2009-02-19 07:16 pm (UTC)
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2009-02-19 07:28 pm (UTC)
...which I guess is kind of the point. But yeah, I wouldn't mind seeing stuff written from the POV of other people in his circle (Marlot, Violet, Pala, even Barley) or other MU students entirely. Sometimes I need a break from Jamie, too. Plus it might allow you to jump around a little more -- MOAR's still in the first few weeks, after all, while ToMU's edging up on winter.
In the end, really, keep writing what you want and I'll keep reading. I've enjoyed everything you've put out for MU so far, even if certain characters piss me the hell off sometimes.
2009-02-19 07:32 pm (UTC)
I'm really liking the story arc right now, but I would appreciate a more traditional novel format - and this seems an appropriate place to put the MU interludes, too.
2009-02-19 10:28 pm (UTC)
But I feel like, at least lately, Jamie is a more fleshed-out character than Mack (sometimes)--and it's nice to have plotlines with at least vague resolutions, rather than tons of plotlines piling up one behind the other.
2009-02-19 07:35 pm (UTC)
Ideas of people's PoV I'd like to "see" things from:
Iason
Marlot
Puddy
Violet (THAT should be interesting!)
Ian
Victor
Random Normal Human as yet un-named...
Maybe even some of the teachers or other faculty.
You've done a great job with Jamie so far, but there are many other well-formed characters in your stories who may have a very unique perspective on things!
Just my opinion, as a reader! I love your writing... I check 3-8 times a day (depending on how busy I am!) for updates!
2009-02-19 07:48 pm (UTC)
First, define normal.
I would actually like to see a character that most people would consider normal. That is, heterosexual, not minority, etc. I honestly don't feel like I can identify with any of the characters in either story. Problem is, I doubt they'd stay "normal" very long, what with the situations AE likes to toss out.
2009-02-19 07:47 pm (UTC)
2009-02-19 08:17 pm (UTC)
If this is just a question of whether it's to be Jamie's TMU or Various Interlocking TMU... dunno. I think it'd be worth the experiment to try the second. You've got quite a lot of other characters (Iason? Nymphs? Mermaids? Full humans?) who could stand being in the spotlight for a while.
I'd be disappointed not to still see Jamie stories, but I don't see that it has to be an either-or.
Change format - if I had a vote...
2009-02-19 08:25 pm (UTC)
I've really enjoyed seeing a little more of Pala and her experience while still following a related time/eventline to TOMU...
Just like you're doing with Other Tales... Expanding the MUniverse and fleshing out other characters really weaves the main story tighter...
That's my two cents anyway...
Whatever you decide - I'll still be reading....
Thanks for all the work you do!
Hoping Moarmu doesn't disappear
2009-02-19 08:35 pm (UTC)
The idea of having a mosaic of character viewpoints in MOARMU would be cool too though. Especially if it keeps it from disappearing. If you do go that route, I'm hoping that Jamie remains a major character.
2009-02-19 08:52 pm (UTC)
2009-02-19 09:03 pm (UTC)
2009-02-19 09:13 pm (UTC)
Just as seeing Mackenzie and her crew from Jamie's perspective has been quite revelatory as well as damned interesting, the same could be said for seeing Jamie and Company from other perspectives, especially from those who are in a position to have formed some opinion, however well informed, of both Mackenzie and Jamie. How does Barley perceive them? Or Marlot? Or Honey?
Expanding MoarMU might allow you to introduce a lot of the information that you can only slip in with an Other Tale, and do so within the context of the ongoing story line rather than as a separate and, to some extent, extraneous story.
For those who are interested in Jamie as a character to the same or even greater degree than Mackenzie, you might tag forthcoming MoarMU stories written from his viewpoint as "MoarMU featuring Jamie Bowman" or something along that line.
One last benefit of expanding MoarMU to include other viewpoints or follow other characters: you can mix and match viewpoints within a single chapter, just as you currently do with SHN and VoDo. Write a scene written from Jamie's POV, switch to another POV, alternate the POVs of two characters to show how their takes on a mutual experience differ—the possibilities are intriguing.
So I say, "Much more MoarMU! The MoarMU the merrier!" :D
(I also say, "Thank you, Ma'am! May I have another?")
2009-02-19 11:35 pm (UTC)
My own list of characters I'd really like to peer into the minds of includes Violet and Barley, because they have some of the best quirks in the MUniverse, in my opinion; Iason, just to peer into the mind of a half-elf with a little more emotional stability, not to mention to see how he actually thinks; Sooni or Kai, if they actually think in Pax and not Yokano; or maybe a couple of the teachers, like Callahan or Bohd.
One of the reasons I like MoarMU so much is that it allows great room for irony that nobody in the current MUniverse perspective will get. The thing about Barley and clothing, for example, hasn't been commented on by anyone in the MoarMU... social circle? Character network? Whatever you want to call it. Anyway, the readers all know the clothing significance from Amaranth in the other series. Things like that really help to shape the universe into a cohesive whole, I think, and I'd love to see those kinds of parallels continued, no matter whose eyes we're seeing it from.
I also wonder whether More Tales could have the odd third-person perspective, to show how even some of the day-to-day interactions of Mackenzie and Amaranth, or Jamie and Violet, or whoever, to some extent require the internal monologue to fully understand. It'd be a good way to get a partial informational tidbit out, or to show what a conversation looks like from the outside.